[WIP] MA5D

[Corndogman]

The part above the front grip (below the two long horizontal indents) looks way too flat. Give it more shape, less 90.

Now that I think about it, the whole area behind the front grip is also very flat looking, and doesn't flow very well into the back of the gun, how it just stops at a 90 degree angle. The grip itself is also kind of boring, but its a little better looking than the surrounding areas.

[Horns]

Grips on guns wrap around the metal/plastic on the handle therefore they should be thicker then the handle. Yours is just weird looking.

[SnaFuBAR]

look at the blueprints in the resources thread if you have any doubts about proportions.

[=sw=warlord]

look at the blueprints in the resources thread if you have any doubts about proportions.

Yeah, i've already checked this against the blueprints and so far it's seemed rather solid in terms of proportions.
I've mainly modeled this weapon using this as the main refference.
I don't particulary want to have to remake it all over again but i will if you personaly think i should do to gain a better result.

[SnaFuBAR]

Looks like you're having a bit of fucked up mesh in some places. I would suggest checking out modifiers like bend and shell, as well as tools like quickslice.

[=sw=warlord]

Looks like you're having a bit of fucked up mesh in some places. I would suggest checking out modifiers like bend and shell, as well as tools like quickslice.

Ok thank's i've used quickslice quite a bit in making this but il check out shell and bend.
Thank's for the advice.

[Warsaw]

Here's an idea for you:

Ditch that shitty Halo quasi-pistol grip and make it more ergonomic; as it is, Bungie has given the troops a painful weapon to use.