No.
Steinbrenner High School.
e: Just looked at the golden state warriors logo. Whoever designed this one has no imagination.
No.
Steinbrenner High School.
e: Just looked at the golden state warriors logo. Whoever designed this one has no imagination.
Last edited by Futzy; September 5th, 2009 at 08:10 PM.
aside from some anitomical issues the drawing is decent but the logo itself isn't that great. Though I assume you didn't design the logo so unless you have the option of altering the design of the entire logo then I'll hold my tongue.Originally Posted by MrBig
Ya, I'm not allowed to alter the logo much at all.
I outlined it in paths in front of my adviser and he said not change how I did it from there.
If you can point out the anatomy issues for me that would be nice. It's pretty much my first time drawing a human.
DeviantART version has a couple changes http://avpdragon.deviantart.com/art/Warriors-136033799
Last edited by Futzy; September 6th, 2009 at 04:55 PM.
Really big wip. Just looking for some suggestions on the shape. Was a bitch getting the face proportions to look right. Something still doesn't look right though.
Vagina chin.
His mouth doesn't look shaped correctly, and his eyes seem too squinty. Looks good though.
The nose is the only thing I see as going in the wrong direction. It looks pretty accurate at that LOD from what I can see.
I haven't sculpted in the nose yet.
The chin doesn't look right. In the concept it seems to be more "blocky" or flat in front, while yours is smooth all over.
Looks very nice disaster.
In the concept it looks like the sides of the chin bulge out and then the lips are thin and puffy. In yours it looks like the chin and lips have nave no visible difference.
WIP site for my school newspaper:
Someone else is doing all the coding, I'm designing everything.
Right now we've got the front page layout up and running, but nothing functional.
The font is too small. You've got a TON of real estate that you aren't using. Functionality should always go before form. My only other concern is the size of the pictures (how long will the site take to load?).
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