Hey, show us the parts of the building. Nobody posts stuff like that here. I'm really curious to see how it was made.
The machine gun: I think I told you when you first showed me, but the front grip seems waaay to tall. Otherwise I'd say it's pretty solid - I suppose it could use bit more flair in some places, but then again I don't really have the knowledge to give you any serious crit on it beyond my gut feeling. I would have spiced up the magazine a bit with some indentations or labels or something.
I absolutely love the AR-ish thing, with the exception of the top bit. I would have added some up-down tapering to it to add a little more variety... too late for that now though. The trigger area looks like it could use some cleanup compared with the quality level you've got on the rest of it.
On both of those it kinda looks like you hit a point where you ran out of steam and just wanted to finish it; I'm not sure if that's actually what happened but some parts have noticeable drops in detail/visual style compared to the rest of the piece.
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