Quick-Crit 2010

[thehoodedsmack]

The second panel could be changed to imitate the scene where the inception crew boards the plane: Cobb giving the team the thumbs up, everybody set and ready to go, then his reaction in the third panel has more effect. A fourth panel would also be helpful in that case, with a view of the plane from the outside, clearly showing the NASA logo.

[ExAm]

The second panel could be changed to imitate the scene where the inception crew boards the plane: Cobb giving the team the thumbs up, everybody set and ready to go, then his reaction in the third panel has more effect. A fourth panel would also be helpful in that case, with a view of the plane from the outside, clearly showing the NASA logo.

The problem with this is that the punch has to be on that panel for it to have the effect I want. There can be no panel after that panel, or it breaks the flow. The first idea is good, though.

put a tiny Nasa logo on somebody's shirt in the last panel instead?

This is a much better idea. I'll probably put one on the inside fuselage somewhere or on hawking's jumpsuit.

The last panel needs more indication of whats going on.
Have a few windows or some generic plane props. If I was to see that panel alone with no context, I would think they are floating around a slanted room.

Then really you're not very observant. The second panel makes it clear they're on a plane. I did some research and it looks like vomit comets do have windows, so i'll put those in.

[Sel]

my first proper drawing

one of these days I'm gonna turn furaffinity into my own purrsonal goldmine ok!