Quote Originally Posted by p0lar_bear View Post
The apparent angle at which he falls and the angle the letters fly out of his mouth as he falls don't match; it looks like he's swooping down, but really, he's just falling.

Also, maybe you should exaggerate the level of the horizon a bit, and have it down a bit lower for the guy on the cliff, then raise it up some as he falls.
I thought of that like, an hour after I posted it. Too tired to edit it now, plus I already turned it in.