Quick-Crit 2011

[ExAm]

It was a quick, last minute choice to define the outsides a bit more. Looks perfectly fine in normal light, but my cellcam makes it way too obvious.

[Rainbow Dash]

little late obviously

[Dwood]

Those legs, they have no definition sel. And its back, needs more than just a curved line. If you want to keep doing fur art like this, at least get used to human anatomy and then adding fur to it.

Edit: And the left foot is kind of angled awkward if she's meant to be walking.

[Rainbow Dash]

Those legs, they have no definition sel. And its back, needs more than just a curved line. If you want to keep doing fur art like this, at least get used to human anatomy and then adding fur to it.

Edit: And the left foot is kind of angled awkward if she's meant to be walking.

she?

lol

also no, he's not walking, what is definition

[Dwood]

Wait, that's a he? really? reaaaaally now? If you're serious then you'll want to use more defined and sharper edges. when draweringering your porn.

[Rainbow Dash]

you do realize I'm drawing retarded

can you please explain what you're telling me to do in terms I would understand

what does defined mean, and why would I want to use sharper edges

[Warsaw]

The face is too round is basically what he's saying. The body is definitely male, as it lacks hips of any kind. It also has a very flat back.

[Rainbow Dash]

The body is definitely male, as it lacks hips of any kind.

hold on let me reference myself

I have hips

and a dick

am I a herm

[Dwood]

Change the eyes and the face. Should be more rough, sharper edges. Edit: When drawing fur-men use more angles. Exaggerate them. And, make the arms a bit more defined. Also, if you're awkward with drawing hands, make the fingers, and the palm-area match- fingers are the same length as the palm. Draw a LOT of hands until you feel less awkward with them, because I know that the way you're drawing them now, there's no way you don't feel awkward.

[PenGuin1362]

Here's bake and diffuse of the tank. Tri count came to 13720