I am making another concept as Geo, the one who would be modeling this, did not like it. Variation # 2:
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/n...ype2copy-1.png
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I am making another concept as Geo, the one who would be modeling this, did not like it. Variation # 2:
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/n...ype2copy-1.png
I prefer the second one, since it's much more Halo-like, and would fit much better into the Haloverse.
Thank you, it is based off of the spartan III's.
Its ok, looks too messy.
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Originally Posted by TeeKup
What.
The majority of reviews for that game cited how bad it was. I played it myself. It was a terrible game.
That's nice, but its offtopic. Get back on plz.
Haze = 'teh' pwn.
and that concept looks overly detailed for a spartan, helmet idea is cool though sorta looks E.V.A
Yeah, Way to much detail for a spartan.Quote:
Originally Posted by Malloy
I wanted spartans to have a more futuristic look, on the subject of messy, its a simply greyscaled concept to get across the image of what it is, basic shapes, nothing too fancy and only took a grand total of 20 minutes.
I hated blocky spartans, they just never did it for me. Also I can not add much variation to the normal spartan armor as its been raped to hell and back by everyone else before I even got to this forum, so I have to make do with making something a little more new. Right now I am trying to keep the halo feel, while adding something completely new, trying to find inspiration on google.
who the fuck?Quote:
Originally Posted by NinjaFish
Hush.
Haze was terrible.
WHAT THE FUCK? What do you mean man. I mean, I just said get back ontopic. Just because he is an older member does not mean he can break the rules.
HL2 citizens have the faceposing range of a brick. It's either very subtle or they look like they just stepped out of The Idiots of Garry's Mod. The only characters who have tolerable faceposing are the main ones, particularly Alyx. I don't want to ruin the picture with a grin that would put a chimpanzee to shame or an angry face that looks like it just stepped out of Loony Tunes, so I keep it fairly neutral.Quote:
Originally Posted by JunkfoodMan
:lol:Quote:
Originally Posted by disaster
Oh my lord.
e: btw, disaster, your UMP is p bad. look closer at your references, they don't look like that.
That came out wrong, What I was trying to say is that the detail on it doesn't look like something that would be on a spartan. And it seems to cluttered. I don't see much wrong on the UMP. Would you care to clarify?Quote:
Originally Posted by SnaFuBAR
http://hkpro.com/ump.jpg
Wait, is that what you used for your modeling reference? Never use something that low-res. Also, please tell me you have other references too. A few side shots and several from different perspectives work best as you can properly work out proportions and such.Quote:
Originally Posted by disaster
Here, about a minute on google:
It's a tad blurry, but it's higher res, and I can make out some things that I couldn't in your reference image. Just go out and search for more pics of it.
I have other pics. http://hkpro.com/ump.htm
http://www.auwo58.dsl.pipex.com/ump2.jpg
And just so you know, thats the low res model. I'm working on the one for the normals bake right now.
K, was making sure you had better references than that pic you showed. Anyway, I realize it's the low poly model, but if it doesn't look like an ump, then it doesn't. I'm not around guns often enough and I don't model them often enough to be able to tell you what's wrong with your model. Just wait for snaf to reply or something.
A base I made just the other day. I want to know what I could do more to it, like the top part. Any advice?
http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s...stokickurz.png
It's too thick, too boxy, and the random jaggedness makes no sense. Forerunner architecture is elegant, that's not.
Explanation accepted. Move along, citizen.Quote:
Originally Posted by rossmum
Should I start over then?
Playing with reactor
Playing with with fumefx.
Should've added some terrain and a driver and maybe some stuff hanging down to show animations for movement, because without any land marks or anything but the tires bouncing, it looks like its just hopping in one place, then keels over from a heart attack at the end. To be honest reminded me of some add kids I see around the school.
here is a wip of a laser rifle im designing....
http://i486.photobucket.com/albums/r...iflenormal.jpg
http://i486.photobucket.com/albums/r...ewireframe.jpg
like it.
Claims of "Where's the trigger blablabla" might come next, but I say be different. Who says guns need triggers?
ha, this is only the top part of it, i haven't even started on the grip, arm rest and such
I thought it was an odd looking vacuum cleaner when I first say it :P.
Yes.Quote:
Originally Posted by killer9856
Well, no one has posted any crit of it yet in my thread, and I can't really continue working without knowing if it's accurate or not. :XQuote:
Originally Posted by flyinrooster
Looks pretty good. The clip seems a little blocky though.
Looks like you're missing the button that you press to pop the top cover loose, as well as the clasp for the upper forend
Oh shit, can't believe I forgot that. I was going to do it after finishing the rear sight. Thanks, ross.
And, I also forgot the clasp, I'll go make that.
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Clasp
http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/5297/claspny4.jpg
Button
http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/9010/buttonmb5.jpg
looks like a dust busterQuote:
Originally Posted by L4meS4uce
I think I saw something similar on unreal tournament. Malloy showed me the picture?
Nice but if some hexagons had different shades of blue and it had more of a glossy feel to it. Higher res, maybe 1680 x 1050? :3
Would rep.
White speckles... I know it's supposed to be the shiny-ness of it, but it's all pixelated; doesn't blend well when you look at it too long...
Ill render it at 1680 x 1050 over night with your crit. The Vray sun is what made the speckles appear. Ill widen the spec and have the DOF blur it a bit.
you look like a dust buster!Quote:
Originally Posted by ExAm
not reallu, i think i might change the front part in a bit, just depends on where i go with the rest.
I liked the other one better.
You made it all generic and gay with that angle. Looks to matte too.
I made this.
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/3835/wutsr4.jpg
Looked like a boring sex toy. So I made it more interesting.
http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/5064/wutfireal1.jpg
By virtually setting it on fire?
No, by fixing the camera angles.
Forefunner?
I think its to detailed for forerunner... what do you guys think?
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g2...tructure_1.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g2...ucture_1_2.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g2...ucture_1_3.jpg
Wireframe;
lol, Forerunner too detailed? Yeah right XD
Its forerunner on my mind, but that pole that extends from the roof to the ground annoys me
Too detailed? No. Too organic? Yes. Forerunner architecture is largely angular, that's far too curvy to fit. If anything, that's nearly Covenant.
Crap yeah, forerunner stuff is detailed. I just clicked in Lol. It does seem strange. Part forerunner and part covy in my eyes.
I'm going to make another one.
Its the boxes thats making it not Covenant. Also one thing odd about Halo PC/CE is that the human structures, have forerunner properties in it.
Better?
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g2...tructure_2.jpg
I don't know what to put in the middle though...
In the middle, put a Beam Emitter structure to show that beams shoot out of it.
Still not Forerunner. It's hard to describe, but think in triangles. 30-60-90 triangles would be good there.
They need to be connect somehow, either a base structure or beams or rods
Not necessarily
Well I dont know what throws you off :/
Im adding a base in the middle which can go underground.
And some pipes.
Edit: Does anyone have any designs? Lol. I am shit at designing and I wanna model forerunner.
Well I started on some arbiter esque armor, and I wanted yalls opinion on where to go with this, as since I have finished the shoulder set, I want to know anything I can improve on beforehand before moving onto the main chest.
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/n...relitecopy.png
I would prefer if you made your drawings have sharper edges. Because they are always blurry. Looks good though.
I feel like it is missing something in the bottom centre, anyone got any ideas of anything I could add to it to improve/fix it?
http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/597/renderhs2.jpg
Or finished themQuote:
Originally Posted by Hunter
The concepts for the Spartans did not require arms or legs as we already have those decided, so yes I did finish those, they only wanted head and chest armor.
If only ;)Quote:
Originally Posted by Heathen
Also nice forerunner structure, although it looks plain in one area.
Wait can forerunner architecture be thin? Because those thin boxes going up tells me this isn't forerunner.
Still the top is the only thing Im liking right now
Should be a continous piece in place of the gap with those circles, and the tall end doesn't look Forerunner at all. Looks closer to human design than anything.
Monkey drag those things on the sides out to the front.
XD I think I will leave forerunner and just made forerunner/human. Because then it is right Lol.
At least I practice and get better while all you do is make little snide comments from the side lines and gather dust.Quote:
Originally Posted by SilentWindPL
nice future faucet.Quote:
Originally Posted by Evil_Monkey
Its a shower for scarabs
Hunter, take a look at my edit.
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u...tructure_2.jpg
What you have is way too, well, un-uniform.
What I mean is that the forerunner have a flow to their architecture. Just about everything they built served a purpose. The bit that you made seems like it'd have the laser thing shoot out of the middle.
Quick 30 minute vehicle model based off a concept in my mind, modeled as i go
http://i218.photobucket.com/albums/c...vehiclewip.jpg
http://i218.photobucket.com/albums/c...ehiclewip2.jpg
I can do that too
http://tbn1.google.com/images?q=tbn:...20/legocar.bmp
I cant see it, to small
Good but your overall shading seems wrong, the armor or whatever it may be, has no depth whatsoever.
Ok, I will work on that, guessing that more contrast in the shading will give it more depth.
Reminds me of Prince of Persia oddly...
Can't wait to see that thing take a cornerQuote:
Originally Posted by Advancebo
Handles seem really small.
what?Quote:
Originally Posted by rossmum
http://i218.photobucket.com/albums/c...o/shatbrix.jpg
Yeah, I just wanna rip those handles off, they annoy the hell out of me. Make em' bigger.
Meaning it'll roll very easily.Quote:
Originally Posted by Advancebo
The handles on that gun are waaay out of proportion. The mag also seems really skinny
Been working on this during the holidays
http://i218.photobucket.com/albums/c...ancebo/br1.jpg
http://i218.photobucket.com/albums/c...ancebo/br2.jpg
http://i218.photobucket.com/albums/c...ancebo/br3.jpg
Yay another battle rifle!
Agreed Mech, but it has flaws! :O
^Quote:
Originally Posted by mech
:|
Rep to the next guy who models a Covenant Carbine.
I modeled one awhile ago. Lol
http://media.moddb.com/images/mods/1...04/Carbine.png
+repped lol
theres a massive error on that thing in the middle, fyi.
Me and Csfloyd*Quote:
Originally Posted by NuggetWarmer
Although you did all the sexing i made the base model :I
You deserve more credit but i deserve some for the base model eh?
where looking at the same thing then Lol.Quote:
Originally Posted by DaneO'Roo
The model is completley innacurate in most places.
fyi, alternate accounts aren't allowed, csfloyd/steguana
but this account wasnt letting me post for some reason.
Well guess its fixed, sorry.
It seems to be missing the means to hold and shoot it properly.
Yeah, wheres the trigger?
Covenant guns dont use triggers, they use liek sensative things to where u squeeze and it shoots, So i herd.
