Proportionally a few things are a bit off. The button size seems a bit small, but that might be because you ignored how the handle gets skinnier past the textured part of the grip. You also ignored the lip where the lamp goes inward where the light comes out.

The point was, that when you have a reference image your work will turn out a ton better... which it did. Before you start on any project do some research and find a few images of what you want to model. Try your hardest to steer away from taking reference images from games because when you do most novice artists will stop at the detail level that the original artist stopped at.

I chose to give you the flashlight because it is a simple shape, just a series of extrudes.. but I wanted you to pay attention to certain things and was wondering if you'd attack the grip or not. I'm disappointed that you ignored it, but it's also something that'd jack the poly count WAY up.

I'd like to see you attempt the grip, just to see how you'd go about doing it. With the proper setup you could make that grip in about four minutes, but I want to see you go through it and post your results.